Excellent VN, with a lot going on, so the story does feel a bit fast-paced, but it feels natural enough. The VN does care for small details, and as a new VN, you're doing very good so far. Can't wait to see how the story unfolds in the future.
OMG!!! This has been quite a rollercoaster of emotion. I can't wait to see how this story unfolds in the future. The best VN i have read so far. The emotions, the art, everything is so goddamn great. The ending though is quite a shocker.
OHMYGAWD!!! I'M SO HOOKED!!! What can I say... it's very good, and writtenly well and well paced. Loved the characters and their fleshed out personalities and the world building and I cannot wait for the next update! The ending/cliffhanger OHMYGAWD!!! 😨😨😨😨
Ngl, the best VN I read So far. The romance scene, Horror, the emotional, I'm very like your storyline. I would like recommend this VN to my friend. Keep the spirit!! ❤️❤️
I never write on VNs but holy this is amazing! I was honestly able to play through the whole VN in one sitting and am Definitly going to become a patreon member, need more of this!
I stretched this VN out in the span of a few days and WOW, I’m amazed by how it always had me on the edge of my seat. The characters are unique (Atticus my beloved) and very well written so far. I can’t wait for the next build!
Honestly, I can say with 100% certainty that this was by FAR one of the BEST VNs I have ever had pleasure of reading, the art, the story the emotions that I felt while reading, truly god tier. I will be eagerly waiting for the next chapter and I know I will enjoy every single second of it. Such an amazing work from every single person working on it and all of you should be so proud. BRAVO! ❤️❤️❤️
This has been a real treat to read, and I am so far extremely invested in this VN. Thank you ever so much for the meal so far and I can't wait for the other courses.
Also, random question, would it still be qualified as a spoiler if it happens at the start? And I don't mean at some point in the start, I mean like you open the game, and this is said almost immediately
Like saying something like Oh, it's crazy how the character gets something called star sickness, " which is told to us very early in the VN, is that still qualified as a spoiler? imma put it down here just in case btw no my words just and example
THIS IS AMAZING, and I love the fact that in the last dream we had, Kai supposedly ripped out our gts and was biting our ribs but because I was a dream we don't think of it but at the end we see the dead person with their gus out and ribs gone I guess that's like a reference like everything that was happening to us happened to them I may be wrong I don't know but its what I like to think I LOVE THISSSSS TYSM FOR MAKING THIS EXIST
Also why is it that I find that blood picture of kai so hot like I was not worried about death that entire time I was looking at his body I was like "mmm nice"
It would be... in all honesty, very hard. I am lucky and fortunate to have a friend that was willing to baby sit me and teach me everything haha. So as someone who can barely code as is, I can tell you it's a bit of a nightmare if you don't have someone to walk you through it
Thank you, I hope you will continue to improve. Your game is very memorable lol and sometimes I wonder what happened to the character I play😅 was he murdered by Kai? Overall I like it. Good luck with the game's development.😊
I honestly really like this VN and the direction it's taking, especially when it comes to the psychological horror, the terror of the player, and the imperfections the characters have, even the main, of course. Slight spoiling ahead!
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It's really interesting how the ending makes us wonder how much we hallucinated and how much was real, that's a REALLY solid base for the plot, not to mention the implications this has with Kai. Personally, I doubt he'll be generally painted in a negative spot, evil always lurks from the unexpected, but I assume the idea with this was to enforce the thought that no one is to be trusted. I like that a lot!
As for the romantic aspect, I saw some earlier reviews talking about the confession and all being quite sudden, and maybe I'd agree, but it depends. I've read quite a few visual novels because I am a lonely furry, and I can say this one had me hooked immediately, so it's definitely doing its job correctly, and I have no criticism in regards to the pacing used.
There's doubt, there's uncertainty, regret, then equilibrium and short-lived peace. It feels very well shaped out, even as an early part of a much larger story, and I look forward to how it's going to develop.
I do hope that the villain(s), whoever they might be, won't follow the classic trope of being easily defeated, as I appreciate fluctuation and cohesiveness (to some extent, especially in a story where the characters already feel human and dynamic) AND passion! Please have fun writing this.
Well let me ease your worries that i absolutely love writing this VN, and it's my favorite pass time haha <3 I love that you enjoy and get the pacing. I didn't want to write something where it takes 7 hours for anything interesting to happen, so I developed a way that I believe you can feel a lot of emotions... a lot of BELIEVABLE emotions in a short amount of time. Make no mistake, there's tons more character development to be done, and I will be doing plenty of it in build three As for your comment on the villain, I assure you that they're no pushover hhehehehehhe :)
Just wanted to swing by and say, just finished binging the vn last night and my god I am absolutely loving it so far, Kai is precious and I love him, and the current build left off leaving me on the edge of my seat a bit, I am gonna be having a fun time theorizing and speculating between now and the next build. Bravo to you on the great work so far!
This has been an absolute delight to read. Truly so incredible! The whole cast is quite good! Kai is a stud, Atticus is adorable, and Acadia is very cool.
The story is super unique. While there is nothing wrong with an amnesic start (great ability to add mystery, discovering your own past, etc), it is quite refreshing to have a mystery unfold without the same tried and true method.
Emotionally, I cried through this many times already. I don't remember exactly how many or where, but for a game that is on like, it's second build? That is pretty crazy for me. xD I am an emotional dude, but usually it take like, the 4th day or so before I start bawling.
I have no real negatives to say! Though I did find it funny how seemingly every character is so bi-polar. Almost every character, from our own to Acadia, to Kai, all of them can so quickly go from :D to >:c in an instant.
There is so much more I want to say too, but I don't want to flood this place with a wall of text. Thank you so much for making such a lovely story. <3
Oh, very true! There are very few instances where it wasn't pretty much instigated by our own seemingly over-the-top reactions to things. Though gotta say, spoiler below for anyone not wanting to see:
The one time for sure it didn't seem to be our character overreacting was so well written. When we go to help Kai after his confrontation in the auditorium. When he gets up, comes over and starts screaming in your face, and you just start apologizing, and then suddenly get punched. That was already one thing. But when the character then curls up, protects themselves, starts repeatedly meekly begging not to be hit again... holy shit that was so sad. Really had me wound up. And I can't believe he had such a surprisingly good reason for it too. In my head I went from "This is a red line that doesn't get crossed. This is unforgivable." to "Weeeeelllll, alright.~"
So really, this has been incredible to read. You are delivering some powerful emotions, and I can't wait to see more!
Yes! The game will have 3-4 routs (I want 4, but am unsure how to write it in a way that makes sense with the theme) but three are confirmed, HOWEVER, I am writing it one route at a time. So while the dialogue options you choose here will benefit or negate other routes... those aren't added until much later so the options DO have weight... just not currently
yo dev, dont worry tho...im really appreciate that u try make the other route, its okay if u unsure to write the 4th route. No rush, so take your time you need.
However the ending spook me a little bit😩🤣but i like the horror/egv theme.
PLS DONT MAKE KAI LOOK LIKE A cananibalism, Murderer, and 🍇ist💔💔💔, LOOK AT HIM HE IS SO PURE INNOCENT, AND I KNOW HE ISNT THE MURDERER (PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE)
Once again, brilliant delivery! The story, the sprites... dayum..~ now I do gotta say..
The end did spook me a bit, I was expecting everything BUT that lmao. Still though, brillaint visual novel, and i absolutely adore everything so far, and cannot wait for more! <3
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Is Kai the main love interest or is he just a friend? Because i can only think that its either him or Atticus.
AAAAAAAA ANOTHER PEAK MASTERPIECEEE
And communication is so.... chef kiss~
But I won't forgive that cliffhanger. I was on my edge JSUSJDUSHUSJK
Excellent VN, with a lot going on, so the story does feel a bit fast-paced, but it feels natural enough. The VN does care for small details, and as a new VN, you're doing very good so far. Can't wait to see how the story unfolds in the future.
OMG!!! This has been quite a rollercoaster of emotion. I can't wait to see how this story unfolds in the future. The best VN i have read so far. The emotions, the art, everything is so goddamn great. The ending though is quite a shocker.
So glad you loved it <3
OHMYGAWD!!! I'M SO HOOKED!!! What can I say... it's very good, and writtenly well and well paced. Loved the characters and their fleshed out personalities and the world building and I cannot wait for the next update! The ending/cliffhanger OHMYGAWD!!! 😨😨😨😨
You're so sweet for that! Thank you so much, build 3 is going to blow you away!
this was so good!!! can't wait for more
Thank you so damn much! I appreciate it!
Ngl, the best VN I read So far. The romance scene, Horror, the emotional, I'm very like your storyline. I would like recommend this VN to my friend. Keep the spirit!! ❤️❤️
Thank you so much! I hope you'll love build #3 too when it releases in a month or 2!
What's the canon look of the main character? He's a grey wolf, right? But how does he look like
He will be seen in build 3! partially seen. The MC is meant to be faceless throughout the VN, but you will see snippets
did i witness peak ?!? i'm eager for the update 💖😻
Yes. Yes you did. hahaha! I'm working on it, I swear!
This is easily one of the BEST vns I've ever played, AND THAT CLIFFHANGER?? FOULLLL😍
I'M SO SORRYYY! The cliffhanger will be resolved!
I never write on VNs but holy this is amazing! I was honestly able to play through the whole VN in one sitting and am Definitly going to become a patreon member, need more of this!
Is there no discord server for this vn, I'd love to join it. Also I loved that cliffhanger but like Kai cheated how could you 😭
All will be made clear in build 3!
Also no discord server, but I'm working on it haha <3
that fucking cliff hanger is killing meeee
Same 😭
I'm so sorrrryyyy, I haddd toooo hahaha
I stretched this VN out in the span of a few days and WOW, I’m amazed by how it always had me on the edge of my seat. The characters are unique (Atticus my beloved) and very well written so far. I can’t wait for the next build!
thank you so much <3 it's much appreciated!
PC version is outdated (1.0) despite the zip file saying 2.0
i'm pretty sure that it is the current build but just a naming error
Definitely not outdated, simply forgot to change it <3
The best I've read in a very long time, I can't wait for the next update! Keep it up!
Thank you so much <3 so glad you loved it
thanks to you!
Honestly, I can say with 100% certainty that this was by FAR one of the BEST VNs I have ever had pleasure of reading, the art, the story the emotions that I felt while reading, truly god tier. I will be eagerly waiting for the next chapter and I know I will enjoy every single second of it. Such an amazing work from every single person working on it and all of you should be so proud. BRAVO! ❤️❤️❤️
Thank you so very much! Brings a smile to my face and a tear to my eye to read such kind comments <3
Eco is so bitchy sometimes, for good reason but still.
Oh he's a total bitch a lot of the time haha.
Trueeeeee, he snapped on the twins 3 times and all of those wasn't even their fault
This has been a real treat to read, and I am so far extremely invested in this VN. Thank you ever so much for the meal so far and I can't wait for the other courses.
PS. That cliffhanger was EVIL
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Are we ever gonna learn Kolterran? I know it's a sort of spoilerish question, but I'd love to know what Kai and Jayce talked about.
Yep! To some extent we will!
Also, random question, would it still be qualified as a spoiler if it happens at the start? And I don't mean at some point in the start, I mean like you open the game, and this is said almost immediately
If what happens at the start?
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THIS IS AMAZING, and I love the fact that in the last dream we had, Kai supposedly ripped out our gts and was biting our ribs but because I was a dream we don't think of it but at the end we see the dead person with their gus out and ribs gone I guess that's like a reference like everything that was happening to us happened to them I may be wrong I don't know but its what I like to think I LOVE THISSSSS TYSM FOR MAKING THIS EXIST
Also why is it that I find that blood picture of kai so hot like I was not worried about death that entire time I was looking at his body I was like "mmm nice"
Thank you so muchhhh!
No need to thank me at ALL, I need to thank you for making this. I hope to see more updates in the future!!
build 3 is already being made with cg's in development as we speak, and i write every day!
:000 CANT WAIT!!!!
same may guy... ignored the blood and went hmm HOT
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In android version, there is a problem, the file name is version 2.0, but when installed on the device, it becomes version 1.0.
Just a naming error! It should still function just fine, and I'm trying to learn how to edit that in the future (I am a coding noob)
How easy do you think it would be to code a vn for someone who's never really done coding before? Love this game btw!
It would be... in all honesty, very hard. I am lucky and fortunate to have a friend that was willing to baby sit me and teach me everything haha. So as someone who can barely code as is, I can tell you it's a bit of a nightmare if you don't have someone to walk you through it
Thank you, I hope you will continue to improve. Your game is very memorable lol and sometimes I wonder what happened to the character I play😅 was he murdered by Kai? Overall I like it. Good luck with the game's development.😊
I honestly really like this VN and the direction it's taking, especially when it comes to the psychological horror, the terror of the player, and the imperfections the characters have, even the main, of course. Slight spoiling ahead!
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It's really interesting how the ending makes us wonder how much we hallucinated and how much was real, that's a REALLY solid base for the plot, not to mention the implications this has with Kai. Personally, I doubt he'll be generally painted in a negative spot, evil always lurks from the unexpected, but I assume the idea with this was to enforce the thought that no one is to be trusted. I like that a lot!
As for the romantic aspect, I saw some earlier reviews talking about the confession and all being quite sudden, and maybe I'd agree, but it depends. I've read quite a few visual novels because I am a lonely furry, and I can say this one had me hooked immediately, so it's definitely doing its job correctly, and I have no criticism in regards to the pacing used.
There's doubt, there's uncertainty, regret, then equilibrium and short-lived peace. It feels very well shaped out, even as an early part of a much larger story, and I look forward to how it's going to develop.
I do hope that the villain(s), whoever they might be, won't follow the classic trope of being easily defeated, as I appreciate fluctuation and cohesiveness (to some extent, especially in a story where the characters already feel human and dynamic) AND passion! Please have fun writing this.
Well let me ease your worries that i absolutely love writing this VN, and it's my favorite pass time haha <3 I love that you enjoy and get the pacing. I didn't want to write something where it takes 7 hours for anything interesting to happen, so I developed a way that I believe you can feel a lot of emotions... a lot of BELIEVABLE emotions in a short amount of time. Make no mistake, there's tons more character development to be done, and I will be doing plenty of it in build three
As for your comment on the villain, I assure you that they're no pushover hhehehehehhe :)
Just wanted to swing by and say, just finished binging the vn last night and my god I am absolutely loving it so far, Kai is precious and I love him, and the current build left off leaving me on the edge of my seat a bit, I am gonna be having a fun time theorizing and speculating between now and the next build. Bravo to you on the great work so far!
please share any and all speculations, I love reading them, just be mindful of spoilers!
Just finished reading it and already carving for more! Also i want to clarify, Kai is romanceable character, right?👀
i love this vn sm, cant wait for the new updates out there :3
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in love with this new VN
AND I CANT WAIT TO SEE MORE ON THE NEXT UPDATE!!! Finally another good horror mystery romance themed novel!! Keep up the amazing work!
I can't sleep tonight
I....cant WAIT FOR NEW UPDATE
GURLLL WHATT IS THISSS😭😭 I AM OFFICIALLY OBSESSED RN, I NOW HAVE YOU CURSED YOU WITH THE "UPDATE PLS" SPAM AGHAHA😭
(I genuinely look forward to your every log, truly :3)
This has been an absolute delight to read. Truly so incredible! The whole cast is quite good! Kai is a stud, Atticus is adorable, and Acadia is very cool.
The story is super unique. While there is nothing wrong with an amnesic start (great ability to add mystery, discovering your own past, etc), it is quite refreshing to have a mystery unfold without the same tried and true method.
Emotionally, I cried through this many times already. I don't remember exactly how many or where, but for a game that is on like, it's second build? That is pretty crazy for me. xD I am an emotional dude, but usually it take like, the 4th day or so before I start bawling.
I have no real negatives to say! Though I did find it funny how seemingly every character is so bi-polar. Almost every character, from our own to Acadia, to Kai, all of them can so quickly go from :D to >:c in an instant.
There is so much more I want to say too, but I don't want to flood this place with a wall of text. Thank you so much for making such a lovely story. <3
Ahh, thank you so much <3 now ask yourself if the characters are actually bi-polar... or is the MC just a bit insane haha ;)?
Oh, very true! There are very few instances where it wasn't pretty much instigated by our own seemingly over-the-top reactions to things. Though gotta say, spoiler below for anyone not wanting to see:
The one time for sure it didn't seem to be our character overreacting was so well written. When we go to help Kai after his confrontation in the auditorium. When he gets up, comes over and starts screaming in your face, and you just start apologizing, and then suddenly get punched. That was already one thing. But when the character then curls up, protects themselves, starts repeatedly meekly begging not to be hit again... holy shit that was so sad. Really had me wound up. And I can't believe he had such a surprisingly good reason for it too. In my head I went from "This is a red line that doesn't get crossed. This is unforgivable." to "Weeeeelllll, alright.~"
So really, this has been incredible to read. You are delivering some powerful emotions, and I can't wait to see more!
super awesome, can't wait to see what happens next.
game have too much bug...
what bugs does it have? I haven't had a single bug reported for all of build 2
the renpy error screen kept popping up during the dialogue scene when Eco dreamed of red eyes talking to her causing me to skip most of the dialogue
what did the error say?
I haven't had anyone else with this error, so I'm interested to see what's going wrong with yours specifically
What bugs have you encountered?
yoo plis make atticus route🥹
there will be one eventually! I am making the game one route at a time!
woah really?! sheeeshs i will wait forever if that happen🥹❤️🩹
Yes! The game will have 3-4 routs (I want 4, but am unsure how to write it in a way that makes sense with the theme) but three are confirmed, HOWEVER, I am writing it one route at a time. So while the dialogue options you choose here will benefit or negate other routes... those aren't added until much later so the options DO have weight... just not currently
yo dev, dont worry tho...im really appreciate that u try make the other route, its okay if u unsure to write the 4th route. No rush, so take your time you need.
However the ending spook me a little bit😩🤣but i like the horror/egv theme.
sorry if my english is bad😌
PLS DONT MAKE KAI LOOK LIKE A cananibalism, Murderer, and 🍇ist💔💔💔, LOOK AT HIM HE IS SO PURE INNOCENT, AND I KNOW HE ISNT THE MURDERER (PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE)
I'm sorry... i will do what must be done :'(
Ur kidding right, pretend its aprill fools!? Its aprill fools right💔??
Trust in your chef, and you will be rewarded with a delicious 3 course meal! I PROMISSEEE you it will be worth it <3
acadia looks so damn adorable when she's smiling
Pls don't kill her, Mr. Creator
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Once again, brilliant delivery! The story, the sprites... dayum..~
now I do gotta say..
The end did spook me a bit, I was expecting everything BUT that lmao.
Still though, brillaint visual novel, and i absolutely adore everything so far, and cannot wait for more! <3